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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 7, 2004 21:27:03 GMT -5
i'm sad now i feel like the end of the battle was really disappointing for you guys
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Post by Chung Kyun on Jul 7, 2004 21:32:17 GMT -5
well, i did it this way because i felt that to be true to the character he wouldn't squeal unless he was really against the wall (as he is honorable, just ruthless due to how life has treated him) and i wanted him to be able to die by choice rather than run away like a coward. well he still told ui-min his plans, as a warrior he is a coward who should had standed up even if he had no fingers and kick ui-min even if he got cut by his axe now thats a real warrior. but he is no more. make master duduel show up and let him do what he does. pray to buddah or if he doesn't care, then im ho gwon just stays dead by the mountain. as he threw himself off it. but i don't think with the things he done, he will get respects from them all. lol
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 7, 2004 21:35:58 GMT -5
well, i figured the only reason he told what the plans were was not to be a coward but 1) for emotional closure about his dad 2) to point out how he disapproved with all the personal battles between the warriors and previous weak monarchs 3) he thought he would scare them by revealing that the imperial city was under attack (he did not know that they were prepared)
so in my opinion, i think he was a good warrior.
i was thinking of wrapping up this fanfic and starting another one
what do you guys think?
you can pick new characters with the same initials
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jul 7, 2004 21:38:24 GMT -5
excellent choice to wrap this one.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 7, 2004 21:47:06 GMT -5
kay cool
i will add the epilogue in the morning...
night guys!
again, emperor chung kyun (bows) thank you for being such a good sport as well as an excellent source of ideas!
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 7, 2004 22:19:44 GMT -5
when they had returned to the imperial city, Ji Young was once again banished from the imperial city and when Chung kyun bu's confession was described, the people accepted that Ji soon was innocent.
Choi went to go find chang bi. "Im ho gwon is dead. he was the man behind your uncle's murder and he killed himself when the imperial army captured him. your uncle has been avenged and can walk the heavens in peace." she wept grateful tears as she threw herself into his arms. "perhaps it is time i spoke to the emperor about our marriage?" he asked her, smiling. chang bi only hugged him tighter.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 7, 2004 22:28:52 GMT -5
EPILOGUE:
when the archfiend finally passed away at the ripe age of 75, the nation was wracked with grief. people all over the country bewailed the loss of the imperial dragon, who had reigned so benevolently during the end of his life. unable to live without her husband, bu yong followed her husband shortly after. cremated side by side, their ashes were scattered over mt. mita so that they could travel through the four corners of shilla.
yi ji soon was crowned emperor in a ceremony that was cheered by the people. following his father's example, he continued to fortify shilla's borders and kept his army ever watchful for the threat of foreign invasion. but he also extended a diplomatic hand to the yuan, hoping that one day they would be allies.
brue and choi bu still maintained their loyalty and service to the imperial dragon family. but now, both were husbands and fathers - their sons also faithful servants of the emperor. as byuksang merit subjects, they remained at court to advise and protect the emperor, and the new age of shilla founded by Yi Ui Min continued into the next generation.
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jul 8, 2004 5:32:32 GMT -5
morning all. nice ending, guess the archfiend really couldn't live forever. i am assuming that it was chang bi that choi bu was married to VIB: showed the banner to the same friend, she was more emphatic about you 'wasting' your talent. i reminded her you have chosen a worthy profession. CK: so how does it feel to be an Emperor? way cool huh? enjoy it, you have certainly earned it (many times over ;D) later guys.
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Post by FrederickII on Jul 8, 2004 12:34:41 GMT -5
Excellent story.
velvetinkbrush, I was sick these past few days, I was on the internet only a short time these past few days and i printed the posts I missed. 41 pages in all (about half of the 2nd thread, all of the 3rd and up to page 6 of this one). If this were a soft cover book you'd have a hell of allot material.
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Post by Chung Kyun on Jul 8, 2004 14:00:47 GMT -5
morning all. nice ending, guess the archfiend really couldn't live forever. i am assuming that it was chang bi that choi bu was married to VIB: showed the banner to the same friend, she was more emphatic about you 'wasting' your talent. i reminded her you have chosen a worthy profession. CK: so how does it feel to be an Emperor? way cool huh? enjoy it, you have certainly earned it (many times over ;D) later guys. well lastnight i kind of forgot i was wang lol. it is the same as being any rank. ;D
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jul 8, 2004 14:03:34 GMT -5
well lastnight i kind of forgot i was wang lol. it is the same as being any rank. ;D yeah but those five stars are great and you are no longer an 'addict' of any kind. but are any of us ever going to be free of the AOW addiction? ;D
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 8, 2004 14:16:48 GMT -5
frederick, thank you for the compliment. if i fail med school, the it's aow the graphic novel
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Post by Chung Kyun on Jul 8, 2004 14:17:17 GMT -5
yeah but those five stars are great and you are no longer an 'addict' of any kind. but are any of us ever going to be free of the AOW addiction? ;D na i don't even look at the five stars. i feel sorry for im ho gwon he died the day i became Wang lmao! he lost 5 fingers of each hand (10), and i gained 5 stars. to bad no more ranks to get 10 stars. ;D we will always be addicts of aow. ;D velvet ending was good, people had kids and a happy family.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jul 8, 2004 14:17:23 GMT -5
oh and i am sorry you were sick
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jul 8, 2004 14:18:44 GMT -5
frederick, thank you for the compliment. if i fail med school, the it's aow the graphic novel hey VIB, have confidence. no matter what, you have your many talents.
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