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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 28, 2004 23:26:57 GMT -5
general du,
it's five syllables then seven then five again
happy counting!
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 28, 2004 23:29:01 GMT -5
i thought it just had to be 3 lines, non rhyming, and 17 syllables, thanks for the further breakdown. not that i can come up with one anyway. too restrictive for my creative talents. ;D
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 28, 2004 23:33:19 GMT -5
but that's what makes haikus so funny. you can say the most f***ed up stuff and as long as it fits in the style, it's poetry?
have you seen the ones from south park?
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 28, 2004 23:40:24 GMT -5
no, i haven't.
i used to write a lot poetry, haven't done any in a very long time, need to get back in the habit. never have tried this style.
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 29, 2004 14:14:32 GMT -5
i love the archfiend there is no good reason why his death i will hate
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 30, 2004 1:25:51 GMT -5
(applauds enthusiastically!)
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 30, 2004 1:27:36 GMT -5
True, I must admit, The Archfiend can be cuddly When he is a dad
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 30, 2004 9:26:06 GMT -5
(applauds enthusiastically!) bows to applause ;D thanks for urging me on.....maybe i will begin to write again.
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 30, 2004 9:49:35 GMT -5
the archfiend's a man a warrior and a lover bet he's good at both
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 30, 2004 9:53:19 GMT -5
HAHAHAHAHAHA
that was great!
i really liked that one
plus it sums up how you feel about monsieur archfiend perfectly
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Post by AOW FIEND on May 31, 2004 0:54:10 GMT -5
A HAIKU FOR THE ARCHFIEND:
MERCIFUL BUDDHA SO MANY WOMEN TO CHOOSE MY BLESSED DING DONG
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 31, 2004 1:41:00 GMT -5
I give that five stars! too funny!
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 31, 2004 10:52:48 GMT -5
archfiend is mighty and a huge axe he carries gonna whack someone
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 31, 2004 18:23:34 GMT -5
master duduel you were never dead were you? you sly devil you
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 31, 2004 19:39:31 GMT -5
master duduel you were never dead were you? you sly devil you good one. yi ui min, archfiend chi chi chi is so sexy why you gonna die?
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