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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:03:53 GMT -5
okee dokey
(to continue...)
The archfiend approached the king. Standing next to ui min, myongjong looked small and frail. "Are you going to kill me?" myong jong asked. The archfiend remembered how in his youth he had crushed the life out of the previous emperor, and how that memory still haunted him.
Turning to the king, he replied, "i will offer you a choice - either you can choose to die, or you and the imperial house can be exiled to some remote island to fend for yourselves." the king paled a little. Choi Bu said under his breath, "Hwang Sang Baeha, is this wise? to offer to let him go?" Ui min looked the emperor up and down and shook his head. "the emperor's life is spent. he did little harm to me as king and he can do even less as a farmer in exile. walking out of the room, he added, "I will give you some time to decide." Myong jong sat back in his throne and surveyed the broken remains of his audience hall.
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Post by ID on Jun 30, 2004 15:05:33 GMT -5
and i am not sure monkey man yi would do that. he changes who he follows depending on whether it will save his neck or not. so i don't think he would ever offer to die for someone else. his entire life was spent trying to preserve it... exactly the same with myong jong. but i don't mind what you do in your story. i still enjoy it. edit- actually he did soem harm to ui min as a king. he ordered a hit on him...
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:07:14 GMT -5
well, it was the only way to save du. some ppl didn't want him to die. the ones who did spoke after i wrote it
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:17:58 GMT -5
Early the next morning, Yi Ui Min ascended the steps to the kings chambers and was greeted by the sounds of wailing. As he drew closer he heard cries of, "Hwang Sang Baeha! Uht Jae? (How could you do this?)". Entering the kings bedchamber, Ui min saw the cause of the commotion. Still wearing his white and yellow robes, the king swung gently from the ceiling from a length of silken fabric tied around his neck. He had been dead for some time. Ui min looked at his face, so different from life. He had expected that death would give myong jong's face a look of peace, but instead, it only made him look more comical. His open eyes bulged and his tongue hung out his mouth - a very unregal final image.
As choi and brue entered the room and saw what was left of myong jong, ui min ordered them to take down the body and burn it. So myongjong had decided. well, the rest of his family would go to one of the remote islands off the coast. perhaps a fate worse than death, but who knew? The archfiend walked out of the late monarh's bedchamber, the cries of his family and servants growing more and more faint.
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jun 30, 2004 15:26:19 GMT -5
that's giving it to him vib. glad to see him go. order a hit on my man, you will pay for it.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:28:02 GMT -5
hehe
what else would you like to see?
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Post by ID on Jun 30, 2004 15:31:58 GMT -5
hehe what else would you like to see? i'm not LAF, but i'll like to see monkey man get his.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:33:01 GMT -5
how? he kisses the archfiend's @ss
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jun 30, 2004 15:33:34 GMT -5
i guess all the bad guys are gone and my man is safe. so how about him taking over and how his heart has changed for the good. and maybe a new villan will come to town.
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Post by ID on Jun 30, 2004 15:34:21 GMT -5
how? he kisses the archfiend's @ss exactly. jp
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:36:08 GMT -5
okay suggestions noted
but first...
...a nap
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 15:38:35 GMT -5
no problem, empress
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jun 30, 2004 20:45:37 GMT -5
empress vib, that is a very long nap you are taking ;D
your public is waiting for more of the story. and as an archfiend fan(atic) i am so pleased with it so far.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 30, 2004 21:10:08 GMT -5
empess LAF, *yawn* i apologize for my inactivity!
shall i continue?
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Post by Chung Kyun on Jun 30, 2004 21:10:51 GMT -5
empress vib, that is a very long nap you are taking ;D your public is waiting for more of the story. and as an archfiend fan(atic) i am so pleased with it so far. well not a very long nap. she could wake up at 2am and do more stories. lol
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