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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 31, 2004 21:15:53 GMT -5
archfiend is sexy but if you like him just wait 'til you see sir min
(shameless djg plug)
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Post by jacques on May 31, 2004 21:22:14 GMT -5
Archfiend sweet daddy Love in May or December? Sexy heart Sir Min
('noddah shameless DJG plug ;D)
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on May 31, 2004 21:29:47 GMT -5
hahahahahahahah
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Post by luvarchfiend on May 31, 2004 21:51:26 GMT -5
Archfiend sweet daddy Love in May or December? Sexy heart Sir Min ('noddah shameless DJG plug ;D) and poor KDS has taken 2nd place in the heart of velvetinkbrush. do i hear tears in heaven?
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Post by jacques on May 31, 2004 21:54:51 GMT -5
and poor KDS has taken 2nd place in the heart of velvetinkbrush. do i hear tears in heaven? Heaven-gram from KDS: (Reads) Would you know my name...if I saw you in Heaven...
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generaldu
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The subway charms us so, where balmy breezes blow, to and fro. - Lorenz Hart - "Manhattan"
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Post by generaldu on Jun 1, 2004 8:44:00 GMT -5
general du, it's five syllables then seven then five again happy counting! No! generaldu. You shouldn't write a haiku. It's just not for you.
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 1, 2004 9:13:46 GMT -5
Luvsarchfiend:
It's true. Sir min is so perfect even KDS pales in comparison
(plus he doesn't shout all the time and actually smiles)
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 1, 2004 22:18:05 GMT -5
gen du
i like your haiku
(mini poem)
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Post by luvarchfiend on Jun 1, 2004 22:23:48 GMT -5
gen du i like your haiku (mini poem) micro if you ask me, which you didn't i know ;D
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 1, 2004 22:32:45 GMT -5
haha
micro
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generaldu
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The subway charms us so, where balmy breezes blow, to and fro. - Lorenz Hart - "Manhattan"
Posts: 312
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Post by generaldu on Jun 2, 2004 8:38:47 GMT -5
The seed of decay, Planted in Yi Ui-min's house By Madame Buyong!
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 2, 2004 13:36:34 GMT -5
ooh! i liked that...
aran is a wench and her face is distracting because it is gross
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 2, 2004 13:57:19 GMT -5
hehe bo. you have to contribute to our growing anthology!
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Post by TheBo on Jun 2, 2004 14:00:29 GMT -5
I had a wierd thing happen with my post, accidentally deleted it, and now I'm putting it back:
I can't stay out of this one. (They are hilarious so far.) I found three definitions of haiku:
A) American Heritage Dictionary hai·ku n. pl. haiku, also hai·kus [Japanese : hai, amusement (from Middle Chinese bij, pha·j) + ku, sentence (from Middle Chinese kuh).] 1) A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons. 2) A poem written in this form.
B) Princeton's wordnet haiku n : an epigrammatic Japanese verse form of three short lines
C) U S Census Bureau Haiku, HI Zip code(s): 96708
Personally, "C" is my favorite. Also, as a sometime practicing poet and scholar, my understanding of haiku is that although there are syllabic strictures, the actual form is not as important as the fact that it is a trenchant, witty observation in three (or sometimes two) lines (which is supposed to reference nature but oh, well, who paints on velvet with ink, anyway? LOL).
Bo
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Post by velvet inkbrush of YiSoonShin on Jun 2, 2004 14:02:43 GMT -5
heh, the last one IS pretty funny..
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